the story related to basic life.i think in evry ones life the momemt come wen they hurt thier parent knowingly or unknowingly wen they didnt meet thier expectation frm thier parent.this story tell us v must take care bout parent n love ones.one thing more thate bollywood story mostly based on real life stories as well as imagination.so y to compare with bollywood.at my point of view its realy gud 1 motivating story.

i totally agree with miss/mrs dipti.the only reason this story could be ignored is ignorance of the most important people in on’e lives i.e parents which is next to commiting a heinous crime.now a days worls seems to be infested of so many evils that at least taking care could be sort of a remorse and we shouldn’t let it go off our hands

Title completely correlates with the story as author of the story realizes her fault when there was really no time to repent. Mother-daughter relationship as portrayed here is a shocking reality today. Most of girls hate their mother because they stop them from doing ‘wrong’. But a question rises in the mind that why mother didn’t tell her reality to bring her to right path. She should have tried to cut this communication gap. Most of the problems are due to this only. Had mother talked to her, daughter wouldn’t have been at remorse. But it’s a heart touching story.

@ Anubha,,

Thnks for the comment and the question that has come up in your mind is quite logical, but the thing is there are many answers that requires some maturity to grasp and understand..there is a particular stage to understand cetain things… like, if mother would have told her at that point pf time, then she would have not understood because she was just 6, but when she grew up she didn’t want ask anything because she had that feeling in her heart that mother has killed her brother and she went with someone else that night,,,and she even didn’t want to listen anything..

Children, if not answered and explained or taught at certain stage than they become quite rude, agressive and they will not listen of that person whome they have seen in the situation that they should have not seen….and the situation can be any…..So, this is the reason why mother didn’t tell her daughter and once daughter asked she turned mute because she knew that now she will not understand….it’s too late,,,

thnks

we should not give any space to any type of misunderstanding and must resolve on time.. if we stay far and let the misunderstanding boom then it will turn into an impediment, which will destroy the relationship and later when we confront the reality we are left with nothing but to repent….

above all we can not under estimate the efforts of all the contestants no doubt they have done a wonderful job but the content of this story was somewhat that made me feel a bit biased towards this story.

@ Promod,

I really wanted to bring this thing infront of everyone, because its not only we who suffer and feel repent at last,,,but think about those parents they become the victim of our misunderstanding and rude behaviour, we forgot each and everything done by them for us…

awesome story ..really heart touching…felt like reading it several times ..it really rocks [:)]

@ Nikhil

Thanks

The story is very touching, hats off to the writer.
This is 1st story which i read here n it made me realise what i was missing.
This site is a gud platform for young writer, like Kushboo, who have immense talent but no stage to perform.
No wonder if the writer can give some master piece if she continues writing like this.
Good Luck.

Thanks Rajeev..

@rjeev

it’s vry tragic2 see d child behaviour 2wards their parents, who hav bought thm up and at d end of d day thy behave soo rudly wid thieir parents and brings tears 2 thir eyes,,, its pathetic,, v hv 2 think sumthin, where is tht culture gne whn v used 2 respect our parents n lovd thm. time is surly chnging..does sny1 hv ans 2 this quest, tht where r v moving now?

Hey K H U S H !!!
such a heart touching and awesome story!!!…….
I appreciate & clap for your effort…..

luk nitin to undrstnd our parents is wat v really need bt they must also undrstnd wat ur child want n they do buddy bt sometimes child also wanna knw so parents must also tell thm the truth this was misundrstnding btw mom and her daugther cos mother hide truth frm her child bt her her own health v must undrstnd that these are our children n if v ll nt tell thm truth thn if suddenly truth ll ouccr in frnt of child they will nt b able to grab it so in each n evry relations transperancy is must
mother loves her daughter bt did she evr shown her love parctically to her daughter

yeah dear bt v r there children v have lots of queries in our mind n mom is one person on this earth who undrstnd der children evn wen child didnt uttr a single wrds so i thnk in story mother need to answer her child question

@ Apar

Transperancy is very important in any relationship but as I told earlier here, that some things are bound to be told at right time and right place. And mother daughter relationship is like a friend, which needs the fragrance of flower to make it more joyful….

thanks

Nice One !

@ Azriel, Azad and Devashish

thnks all…

Nice way of putting such a complex but relevant concept..

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khush Says:

we should not give any space to any type of misunderstanding and must resolve on time.. if we stay far and let the misunderstanding boom then it will turn into an impediment, which will destroy the relationship and later when we confront the reality we are left with nothing but to repent….

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The feelings of the author were really touching, but for me her comment/suggestion (mentioned above) was more important than her feelings. So readers, try to understand the moral of the story !!!!!!

Keep Smiling !!!!!!!!!!
—- Pankaj Pandey

@pankaj

thnks pankaj, that is what I tried to say in the above story…

@ Khush !!!!!

Thats right ! People generally forget the story/feelings, but they tend to remember the “moral of the story” !!!! [:)]

@pankaj

ya bro,,ppl 4gt d story n d feeling bt thy remem d moral, i tell u , i went to the old age home,, our institue took us thr nd old ppl thr r so cring n unki aankhon se lag raha tha tht thy need lov n care,,whr r u moving? will our childrn will also do d same? how will repent thn we or our parnts?

@ Nitin and Pankaj

listen to one thing, I also went to one of the old age homes in Meerut,we went there with some fruits and blankets. I went there 3 years back and when I met with those old people they all became so happy and cried. My friends and I talk to them and listen to there stories, they all had ONE thing to say ,,,,,All stories are almost same and taht is ,,,” there children lived abroad and they don’t have anyone to look after them so they have dumped them to this old age homes…” but there were many cases were like because of their daughter in law’s interferences their son has thrown them to this hell. Old age home give assistance to old people but it is like hell only…

when they met us they became so happy and missed their children…I can’t tell you the tragic situation I felt there…..they all were so good…My next article/story would be dedicated to those old people who are living their life like hell after having children settled abroad… :X

a very touching story.eudc dive deep into the heart of person rteading it. and wud remind each of some related phase of life.

I appreciate your next topic.It is a major concern and its great to come up with such a relevant issue.

Good work
Keep it up.

thnks Rani….I would love to write up on the old age people ad their stories by my experience that I have gathered till date…

Simply marvelous! Khushbu
keep penning and keep inspiring us like that!

Rohit yog

@ Rohit

thnks Rohit..

its a very heart touching story…full of emotions dat really made drops of tears cme out of my eyes..!!
d story talks abt a comlex relationship of a child wid his parents…it perfectly showed how complex a relationship can become if it is not handled properly…
i believe it was d fault of d daughter as well as the mother n dats y their relation such a critcal stage..
d daughter could ve tried to find d reason for her hatred twrds her mother n at d same time d mthr could ve tried to tel her d truth at an apporpriate time..!!
all in all i must say- good job done by the author..!!!

donn know what can i say on this
lost 4 words actually
its beautiful
i really got lost into my thoughts after reading this

@ Ankit

Yes, excatly, the things should be told at the right place at the right time otherwise it will create more problems….thnks,,,

@mouli

thnks girl…

@ NITIN

[red]ya bro,,ppl 4gt d story n d feeling bt thy remem d moral, i tell u , i went to the old age home,, our institue took us thr nd old ppl thr r so cring n unki aankhon se lag raha tha tht thy need lov n care,,whr r u moving? will our childrn will also do d same? how will repent thn we or our parnts?[/red]

Hey Nitin whom do u want to blame
love and care is a must for everyone old or young
ur saying u have seen old people crying due to lack of love and care

but there are many children who cry becoz of the same reason due to lack of love and care from their parents

But whom do we blame
Parents who work hard day and night in an effort to provide the best for their children

or the children who after getting a job
strive to provide the same for their own children

BAS PYAAR SE KUCH NAHI HOTHA DOST
(FINANCIAL SECURITY is a must)

@ Rocky

you know what all we need..We need time for each other, we are so busy in our own lives taht we forget about our relationships and don’t get time to talk to our parents also. I will not go far, even I don’t spare 10 mintues in 24 hours to talk to my mom and dad se baat kiye hue to week nikal jata hai..

It is only WE who are careless and show our ignorance towards our parents. we forget that what our responsibilities are towards them.. Parents chahe kaise bhi ho afterall they are parents and parents are never BAD….they are GOD, and if we make them cry then undoubtdly we will getthe same in future from our children..

You are right pyar se kuch nahi hota financial security is also necessary, but see in the race of earning more and more where are we moving?????…

Hope you will get an answer soon,,,when you will become fatherm and grow old….money is important to live life but it is not everything…

“It is only WE who are careless and show our ignorance towards our parents.”

@khuush

dont u think that most of the parents are also ignorant
towards their children huh

@ Rocky

yes, they are but that doesnt mean we also show our attitude towards them, if they are busy then it is only because tehy are working for us… everyone is not perfect we must understand this and should cooperate with our parents and move with them for a better relation…

oh oh oh oh cmon yaar

if parents (old) cant understand the problems of their children (working, young just started their married lives and their own careers)

how can u expect underage (minors)children to understand the problems of their parents(working for them)

and let me tell u this isn’t about attitude or any ego problems
its just that they are forced to do such things

a child always loves his parents and a parent always cares for his/her children

i beg to disagree…..parents are the one to bring their children to such an status, caring throughout their life.n when the turn of kids comes into picture….parents gets neglected.parents should always be first in the priority list of their children

@ Rocky

its not parents who don’t understand but its the children who don’t understand tehir parents most of teh times..Parents can’t do anything wrong to their childrena nd whatever they think and do ,,,will do for teh good of their child….Don’t force me to set u abd give examples of my own

Parents can’t do anything wrong to their children and whatever they think and do

@khuush
Tu aise bol rahi as if children want to do wrong to their parents

People are forced to do such things not by choice (parents ko old age home rakhana and all)

@ Rocky

Exctly, parent don’t want to do anything wrong to their children and its only and only children who don’t understand and in 98% cases children don’t understand their parents. I have seen many parents who have worked for tehir children so hard and when they grow old they don’t have anyone to look after them, in fact children settle abroad and at other places for tehir lucrative jobs and leave tehir parents behind to the Hell named OLD AGE HOMES……

there is no doubt that these homes take care of teh old people but they cannot fulfil the need of the old people…the need of ” LOVE & CARE”

parents should always be first in the priority list of their children

@RANI
BUT i think there is also this saying

“FAMILY COMES FIRST”

family konsa family

mom dad bros and sis
ya
Husband, wife, daughters and sons

KIS KO FIRST PREFERENCE DENA CHAHIYE ????

@ Rani

Yes, you are rigt, parents should come first in everything the child do… :d

@khuush

hey hey
tell u what most of the parents
(middle class, i have no idea about the rich)
want their children to settle abroad and earn only dollar salaries

again whom do u blame

@ Rocky

If I am not mistaken then parents also comes in the family who are the head of teh family. If you behave rudely with your parents and make tehir fun infront of other or throw them out of your house, hurt them ,,,then do you think you will be able to live a healthy life with your children? will your children let you stay in the house when you grow old? No tehy won’t..because GOD is there and we have to pay for the sins we do in our life in this life itself,, and Of course family comes first but family consist of Father, Mother, and Children,,,not only children ….

@rocky

i think i was explicit enough. i mean “parents”. parents are the part of the family…family includes from ur parents to u bieng a parent

@ Rocky

Hey Hey !!

See, here you clarify yourself, if they want their children to go abroad and earn dollars than it is only and only for their good will and good future, they sacrifice their love by sending them abroad..you cannot just b;ame parents for that,,,,it is the responsibility of the children to take care of tehir parents at their old age…

most of the parents
(middle class, i have no idea about the rich)
want their children to settle abroad and earn only dollar salaries

again whom do u blame

@ rocky

well i believe dat parents want their children 2 do well..its nthng to do abt they wantng dem to settle abroad. they live in their own country or abroad..hardly matters..wat maters is dey r dng gud..n dat is wat parents want…but here cms d responsibilty of d children..as a child i dnt want to go abroad leaving my parents behind..if i’ll go i’ll tke dem wid me..
cmmn man!! u cant do nythning more than wat dey ve done for u…!!

hey kush…..i nice attempt bring a forum for knowing the view of the youth regarding the concept of family.

why ru involving GOD into this

PARENTS work hard for their children and in return children throws them into old age homes (god se kya lena dena)

“we have to pay for the sins ”

a person who gets caught in between his own parents and his own family
(family boletho unka spouse and unke betta betti)
and who is forced to make a harsh decision of ignoring his parents should be shown some mercy not criticized